Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Say What? – Specimen 4

  • Location of Discovery: online car forum
  • Context: conversation about high school kids' parents buying them new cars
  • Required Background: how to compose a sentence

"and here we go im 21 now didnt get my first real car until i was 19 bought paid for it cover gas food rent car payments etc im a senior in college."

  • My Immediate Reaction: double take
  • Analysis: Yes, that's correct. That last phrase says "im a senior in college". Yikes. On a positive note, I do appreciate the "and here we go". It at least alerts you to the amazing run-on "sentence" that follows. In case you need to read it aloud, you know to take a deep breath before diving in.

1 comment:

maracavallaro said...

YOU ARE SO RIGHT! IT was jumping all over the place! You are also right, however, about me still hating it.